First draft                  

Women`s work  

        Women`s work is an argumentative issue in our society and there is people who support it and and others who refuse it but , in my opinion women shouldn`t just be confined in the house to do just the household chores. They should go outside to work and show men what they can contribute to the society and their family. Therefore, working outside home for women should be encouraged and facilitated to every family in the world.

      Many women are engaged in various kinds of job, and they have been advancing in society. Moreover, it is quite strange among typical families that a mother works outside the home.There is views argues that a woman`s rightful place in society is in the home. I disagree with this view that women should be confined in the household, and men should work outside; First of all, both men and women should have equal share of their family responsibilities. However, the author states that .It is the duty of the man to provide a secure shelter for the woman, and he must also provide for her financially'.Woman, on the other hand, has as her duty to take care of the man and his children within the home. In old days, there weren`t many places where women could work outside, but now there is many places where women could work.

      In the past, when women stayed at home, it was rare that a women committed a serious crime such as robbery or murder, but today it is not so unusual. In my opinion, because everyone feels temptations of crimes no matter where they are, it is really up to the man and woman if they overcome those temptations. Moreover, people usually plan and think the crimes when they have nothing to do. For instance, if a woman gets busy and enjoys living with realistic achievements from the work outside the home, she wouldn`t even have time to think about doing crime. 

      Finally, there are many views which give women her right to work because it is not forbidden, so we should respect her and her need for work as ahuman. Also our society need the abilities of woman and there are jobs that is suitable for woman .

Outline on woman s work

Outline on woman s work

Introduction

    Womens  should go outside to work and show men what they can contribute to the society and their family.  Working outside home for women should be encouraged and facilitated to every family in the world.
so it is a must to make women work . Both men and women should have equal share of their family responsibilities.

Body

   The importance of women s work for her and her family
   The effect of that on society 
   The benefits of that for providing her family case 
   The jobs that needs the experience of womens specialy

The counter part
    Both men and women should have equal share of their family responsibilities.  It is the duty of the man to provide a secure shelter for the woman, and he must also provide for her financially.Woman, on the other hand, has as her duty to take care of the man and his children within the home. In old days.


Conclusion

  Every phenomena has it s advantages and disadvantages and every part think that his opinion is the correct one.

final draft

         pollution

      
       Pollution has become a major issue over the years. It has caused death, disease, and many health problems. It is a major concern of our world today and not much is being done to prevent it. If not all, a lot of pollution is caused by humans. There are different types like industrial, agricultural, etc. Many people are realizing now the threat that pollution poses to humans. There are three main types of pollution. They are land, air, and water pollution. Land pollution deals with dumps or other harmful substances. Strip mining, digging, and irrigation are types of land pollution also. They aren’t as harmful to us but they scar and hurt the land. Landfills are a major source of pollution. Most are infested with disease or with animals carrying disease.
         Water pollution is abig problem because it related to the people body and causes the diseases. This problem happens because the bad using of people by throwing their useless things in the river and the dead animals ,these all reasons causes the pollution of water.This kind make the strangers take abad impression about us and our country .We do that , regardless of the importance of the river.
         In addition to air pollution is ahuge problem and destroy the country and its people.This kind has many causes like the smoke of our cars and factories and many other reasons.This problem destroy our back ground of our country.
         Hearing pollution is very noisy and make us very bored , this is because the loud sound of the car and people, we can solve this disaster by making the car sounds forbidden and make it with big fine. There is another horrible pollution that I think it is the most dangerous one because of increasing fast food restaurant so it makes the diseases spread in countries and harm the humanity.Finally, I want to say that we should fight against pollution by its kinds.
        

Essay of pollution

Essay on pollution

Pollution is ahuge problem that make all world suffer from it.Ithas many kinds that is spread in many countries like hearing ,air, water and food .this problem has causes and results and should has solution .I think that the most dangerous kind is the pollution of water because it is directly related the body of people that is may make very bad results and diseases to them.
Pollution has many kinds and all of them ate dangerous .For examble the pollution of water that is very dangerous and horrible it is because the nile has huge pollution because of the wrong usage of people who throw every garbage in it regardless of its importance for life .
Another kind of pollution is the air which is so bad and dangerous because it causes many many diseases and as a result it stop the development of the countries , it happen because of the cars ,factories and smoking and many other causes .All these kinds of pollution has bad results like making people work less and think less than before also give abad view about the country that has this problem.
Finally I think that if there is a problem we shall try to solve it specialy aproblem like pollution which is adisaster.

out line of pollution

pollution

pre-draft

-there are many kinds of pollution like hearing water and also the pollution of food.

-every kind of pollution has its causes and effects and of course has its solution .

-water is the most dangerous kind of pollution .

-the pollution of nile is the main cause of the pollution of water and also there is many causes.

-there is many results of that pollution that is very horrible.

-there is many diseases which are spread becouse of that problem.

-we should search and try to solve this problem.

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