pollution
Pollution has become a major issue over the years. It has caused death, disease, and many health problems. It is a major concern of our world today and not much is being done to prevent it. If not all, a lot of pollution is caused by humans. There are different types like industrial, agricultural, etc. Many people are realizing now the threat that pollution poses to humans. There are three main types of pollution. They are land, air, and water pollution. Land pollution deals with dumps or other harmful substances. Strip mining, digging, and irrigation are types of land pollution also. They aren’t as harmful to us but they scar and hurt the land. Landfills are a major source of pollution. Most are infested with disease or with animals carrying disease.
Water pollution is abig problem because it related to the people body and causes the diseases. This problem happens because the bad using of people by throwing their useless things in the river and the dead animals ,these all reasons causes the pollution of water.This kind make the strangers take abad impression about us and our country .We do that , regardless of the importance of the river.
In addition to air pollution is ahuge problem and destroy the country and its people.This kind has many causes like the smoke of our cars and factories and many other reasons.This problem destroy our back ground of our country.
Hearing pollution is very noisy and make us very bored , this is because the loud sound of the car and people, we can solve this disaster by making the car sounds forbidden and make it with big fine. There is another horrible pollution that I think it is the most dangerous one because of increasing fast food restaurant so it makes the diseases spread in countries and harm the humanity.Finally, I want to say that we should fight against pollution by its kinds.
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ردحذفare realizing now the threat that pollution poses (imposes)to humans.
They aren’t (are not) (as) harmful to us but they scar (what does this word mean?" and hurt the land. Landfills are a major source of pollution.
This problem happens because (the bad using of) people by throwing (throw) their useless things (and the dead animals)in the river (and the dead animals) ,
Water pollution is abig (a big)problem because it (is)related to the people('s) body and causes the diseases.
Most are infested (wrong spelling)with disease(s) or with animals carrying disease(s).
This kind make(s) the strangers (other countries)take abad(a bad) impression about us and our country
In addition to(additionally) air pollution is ahuge (a huge)problem and destroy(s) the country and its people.
This problem destroy(s) our back ground of our country(what is the meaning of this sentence?).
Hearing pollution is very noisy and make us very bored , this is because the loud sound of the car and people, we can solve this disaster by making the car sounds forbidden and make it with big fine(very long sentence, try to make it shorter).
Finally, I want to say that we should fight against pollution by its kinds(all kinds of pollution).