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Women`s work  

        Women`s work is an argumentative issue in our society and there is people who support it and and others who refuse it but , in my opinion women shouldn`t just be confined in the house to do just the household chores. They should go outside to work and show men what they can contribute to the society and their family. Therefore, working outside home for women should be encouraged and facilitated to every family in the world.

      Many women are engaged in various kinds of job, and they have been advancing in society. Moreover, it is quite strange among typical families that a mother works outside the home.There is views argues that a woman`s rightful place in society is in the home. I disagree with this view that women should be confined in the household, and men should work outside; First of all, both men and women should have equal share of their family responsibilities. However, the author states that .It is the duty of the man to provide a secure shelter for the woman, and he must also provide for her financially'.Woman, on the other hand, has as her duty to take care of the man and his children within the home. In old days, there weren`t many places where women could work outside, but now there is many places where women could work.

      In the past, when women stayed at home, it was rare that a women committed a serious crime such as robbery or murder, but today it is not so unusual. In my opinion, because everyone feels temptations of crimes no matter where they are, it is really up to the man and woman if they overcome those temptations. Moreover, people usually plan and think the crimes when they have nothing to do. For instance, if a woman gets busy and enjoys living with realistic achievements from the work outside the home, she wouldn`t even have time to think about doing crime. 

      Finally, there are many views which give women her right to work because it is not forbidden, so we should respect her and her need for work as ahuman. Also our society need the abilities of woman and there are jobs that is suitable for woman .